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Most Helpful Favorable Review

2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

This is an unusual fascinating horror thriller

In New York City, Simon Burns expects a promotion as a senior account executive when his boss Tom Harrison says he needs to talk to him. Thus he was unprepared to be fired as he saw no warning idiot lights. To make matters worse, Tom refuses to either speak any furthe...
In New York City, Simon Burns expects a promotion as a senior account executive when his boss Tom Harrison says he needs to talk to him. Thus he was unprepared to be fired as he saw no warning idiot lights. To make matters worse, Tom refuses to either speak any further to him nor explain why. Fuming over his boss' slight, at his family's Manhattan apartment, he informs his wife Alison who's not the least bit upset with his news. Instead she tells him to be a stay at home house-husband raising their toddler.

Neither Simon nor Jeremy seem to fit in at the various playgrounds they go to except one in Battery Park. There he meets Michael the leader, Charlie the fireman and Roman; they have a tight pack but welcome Simon and Jeremy. One night Simon visits Michael's loft, but wakes up in Mendleham, New Jersey. He does not remember a thing after drinking beer at Michael's place, but feels stronger and has a much more powerful sense of smell. On the day he awakens on the other side of the Hudson, a wolf mauled Tom. Michael has the pack as his alibi Michael invites his friends to his loft for steak and suds. Michael's father explains to him what will happen if he goes, but he fears his friend is too strong for him.

This is an unusual fascinating horror thriller starring a milquetoast who becomes a virile stud. Alison believes she knows what is going on, but her theory proves wrong as the sense of foreboding grows while the secrets of the pack are slowly provided to readers. Mindful of a younger Jack Nicholson's Will Randall in Wolf, Simon is easy to understand as a likable person who goes from outsider to insider when the joins the Battery Park Pack, but fears he may harm his beloved wife and son.

Harriet Klausner

posted by harstan on April 10, 2011

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Most Helpful Critical Review

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Predictable with Bonus Sexism

This plot was predictable and shallow. It only took the monsters as seriously as needed to move the plot, but no deeper. There's no compelling world-building. The characters range from bland to off-putting. And the women...they were so far from having realistic behavior...
This plot was predictable and shallow. It only took the monsters as seriously as needed to move the plot, but no deeper. There's no compelling world-building. The characters range from bland to off-putting. And the women...they were so far from having realistic behavior and motivation, that I thought there would be a magical ghost-in-the-machine to explain them. Nope. They were intended as the real world elements. It was painful to finish. The ending sits there. This book made me realize the downside to ebooks: nothing to return for a refund.

posted by UinBklyn on July 5, 2011

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  • Posted April 10, 2011

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    This is an unusual fascinating horror thriller

    In New York City, Simon Burns expects a promotion as a senior account executive when his boss Tom Harrison says he needs to talk to him. Thus he was unprepared to be fired as he saw no warning idiot lights. To make matters worse, Tom refuses to either speak any further to him nor explain why. Fuming over his boss' slight, at his family's Manhattan apartment, he informs his wife Alison who's not the least bit upset with his news. Instead she tells him to be a stay at home house-husband raising their toddler.

    Neither Simon nor Jeremy seem to fit in at the various playgrounds they go to except one in Battery Park. There he meets Michael the leader, Charlie the fireman and Roman; they have a tight pack but welcome Simon and Jeremy. One night Simon visits Michael's loft, but wakes up in Mendleham, New Jersey. He does not remember a thing after drinking beer at Michael's place, but feels stronger and has a much more powerful sense of smell. On the day he awakens on the other side of the Hudson, a wolf mauled Tom. Michael has the pack as his alibi Michael invites his friends to his loft for steak and suds. Michael's father explains to him what will happen if he goes, but he fears his friend is too strong for him.

    This is an unusual fascinating horror thriller starring a milquetoast who becomes a virile stud. Alison believes she knows what is going on, but her theory proves wrong as the sense of foreboding grows while the secrets of the pack are slowly provided to readers. Mindful of a younger Jack Nicholson's Will Randall in Wolf, Simon is easy to understand as a likable person who goes from outsider to insider when the joins the Battery Park Pack, but fears he may harm his beloved wife and son.

    Harriet Klausner

    2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted July 5, 2011

    Predictable with Bonus Sexism

    This plot was predictable and shallow. It only took the monsters as seriously as needed to move the plot, but no deeper. There's no compelling world-building. The characters range from bland to off-putting. And the women...they were so far from having realistic behavior and motivation, that I thought there would be a magical ghost-in-the-machine to explain them. Nope. They were intended as the real world elements. It was painful to finish. The ending sits there. This book made me realize the downside to ebooks: nothing to return for a refund.

    1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted June 24, 2011

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    Interesting...

    Unsettling, odd, I don't know quite what to make of it. I devoured the book, so it obviously was entertaining. It seems to me that the book is inspired by the classic male "mid-life-crisis" where we no longer feel invincible, young, handsome, or successful. Starr does a good job of expressing those feelings in the main character and thus making the allure of the "pack" in the park seem natural and needed, rather than creepy. I found the increasing "doggy-ness" of the guys kind of funny: "hey!! I am sooo happy to see you!" Woof-woof! lol. Towards the end, the plot felt a bit rushed, with the main character making some fairly abrupt decisions that seemed more necessary for the plot than in-line with his character. Overall, I guess I liked it and will be interested in seeing what comes of this series.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted June 16, 2011

    Great read!,

    A different twist on werewolves....nicely done

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 6, 2014

    Very good read

    I loved it

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 4, 2014

    Sexy

    Sexy werewolf. More R rated than X. Good guy TRYING NOT TO BE TOO BAD?

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 9, 2013

    Flame

    Im already there

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 9, 2013

    Moss

    Ok

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  • Anonymous

    Posted June 18, 2013

    Amber

    I walk in

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  • Posted August 12, 2012

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    I thought this book was awesome! Cant wait to read the next!

    I thought this book was awesome! Cant wait to read the next!

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  • Posted October 12, 2011

    The Pack

    Simon Burns' life is just not going well at all. He exists from day to day, but he is shocked when his boss calls him into his office and fires him with no explanation. He has never been overly confident, not confrontational in the least, and his marriage is not on the best footing. Now, he is reeling emotionally from this latest blow and he finds himself a stay-at-home dad. Frustrated with life and how it is turning out, Simon spends his time taking care of his three-year-old son.
    They get into a routine but one day, breaking the normal pattern, Simon takes his son to a different park. There, Simon meets a group of 'cool' dads and begins to hang out with them. These men are confident, strong and comfortable with themselves, something Simon has never been able to be. Then, one night of food and drinks with the guys changes his life forever!
    His former boss is found murdered and Simon has a strange sense that he had something to do with it. He begins to notice changes in himself, some for the good and some for the bad. He begins chasing clues and has to figure out exactly what is happening to him.
    A well crafted book that will keep you immersed in its pages throughout. There are plenty of plot twists and questions to keep you up well into the night.

    Reviewed by Ashley Wintters for Suspense Magazine

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  • Posted September 8, 2011

    Fun

    Pretty good. Not the best writing...came off as flat in a number of areas. Didn't really draw me in at first, but luckily the overall idea and flow was good.

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  • Posted July 12, 2011

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    Extremely...bland.

    I had hopes...even though the author helped the protagonist evolve, in the end there was still no growth.

    The story moved predictably and methodically. No suspense or surprise.

    It just seems that the publishers will grab any vampire or werewolf books these days, especially if they splash some sex around the chapters.

    0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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