- Shopping Bag ( 0 items )
Posted December 26, 2010
NOT WORTH THE MONEY
This e book is littered with spelling mistakes. The entire setup seems somehow so rushed. Like some TV drama. Just quickly get everything in the 30 minute time frame! Some of the scenarios don't make any sense and somehow vital descriptions seem to miss entirely. For example what where the 'strange' clothes she was wearing when she woke up on the ship? Nowhere is it mentioned what she was wearing in the beginning. I checked! Twice! (at least not in a way that I could recognize the articles of clothing in question)
The main two characters don't know what they want. Their feelings seem to come unprovoked and out of nowhere.
Words are repeated within the same sentence. e.g."It seemed like forever before she could force herself to wash herself with the water." Sentences like this one abound! Bad style. Not that I expect Shakespeare's style in a romance novel, but, by golly, a bit of literary grace does not hurt.
To say I am disappointed is understating it.
One good point I have to make about the book? The cover art. Nice styling! For once not the "windswept beauty" one has to endure on the rest of the covers.
However: this book is not worth the money, no matter how little is charged!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.