Questioning Magic

Interesting story

I really enjoyed the story and characters, however there were many spelling and grammer errors which were distracting, There were also many instances of incorrect words being used such as "there" instead of "their" or "steak" instead of "stake" I was somewhat confused by the ending---is there going to be a sequel or a series? I would definitely purchase another book in the series. All in all a good read.

9 out of 10 people found this review helpful.

Awesome but.....

Great book with some spelling errors

6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

Gay

It was a gay couple gross

2 out of 9 people found this review helpful.

Not worth the time

First off, this book is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. There are many time when "there" is written instead of "their", and the author seems to have no grasp of basic punctuation. The story itself was alright, although the ending looks like the author got bored with writing and tried to finish the book as quickly as possible. A lot of the characters don't have any clear motivation and their emotions are greatly exaggerated. The dialouge was wooden and was pretty much the same for each character. Overall this was more like a first draft than a novel. Perhaps with more editing this could be a great book, but for now I would reccomend reading one of the many other, better ebooks available for free.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

????

Decent storyline but horribly written! Words and even whole sentences where they didn't belong. Spelling and editing errors galore. At the end it seemed to skip the reason for the story and go right to the end. I would not recommend this book to anyone!

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Loved it

Cant wait for the others to come out. Im interested in whats gonna happen next and i cant wait to find out if the blue/green eyed man is his father or not!

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

kcwassup

I hav this book........and i love this book!!!!

I was very disappointed in this book. first off in the synop it

I was very disappointed in this book. first off in the synop it does not tell you that it is the first in a series, and i generally try to stay away from books that will leave you hanging like this one does.i  would comment on the spelling and grammer errors, but as I type this I know I am also making typos, andvthere are already sevetal rants about that in other reviews. Ovet all it has an okay plot, but i would mot in good faith recommend it to anybody,especially since thete does not seem to be a next book out yet to finish the story.

typos galore

The plot itself is interesting and the characters are well built and feel genuine but it can be difficult to follow when having to read through the typos that were constant. Also, the scenes tended to jump. In fact the last chapter before reading the Epilogue was most confusing as they had a battle and won and were in the car at the end of the chapter and in the Epilogue they aren't in the car, and it seems to be in a new battle that they were losing with no explanation as to the missing action between. It was as if a whole chapter or two was missing.

Good

It was a good read but im disappointed at how it ended. It had a huge gap in the end that left me confused .

Ending was rotten

Story was disjointed and skipped around , lots of misspelled words and misused grammar. The last chapter skipped a huge chunk of storyline to the ending and so made no sense

Terrible

Don't waste your time. This book has so many mistakes it is unbearable.

Wat

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0 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Beware

This is an interesting tale with fresh characters. However the story is incomplete which is disappointing. Additionally the work is unedited with so many mistakes that they detract from the flow of the story. I did chuckle at the use of steaks instead of stakes.

Good Read

I enjoyed this book and hope there will be more.
Bad spelling was a bother but easy to overlook.
As for a gay couple....read closer...was just a ruse to protect one of the characters....I hope to see this as a series.

It was suprisingly good

If that person never told me what it was about i probably wouldnt of gotten it so thanks person below me
But i am very mad it left me hangin i wish were longer

Loved it <3 =)

This was an awesome book, it was really good! I hope that there will be another book continuing off of this one. I loved the ending, it was so surprising and sad, i loved it. Poor valentine. <3 ='( great story line though =)

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