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On the fence
posted by onmtntime on July 12, 2012Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted July 12, 2012
On the fence
I am trying to reconcile my feelings regarding this story. It was different than most. The writing was good but since I just finished it the feelings are still fresh in my mind. I found myself feeling badly throughout most of the book. I want to read to cheer me up. Both leading characters were sweet in their own way but his being oblivious for 8 years was frustrating. Going back and forth in time as well as adding secondary characters was distracting. If it had just started in the beginning and went forward then those two things would have a cohesive rather than the feeling of jumping around. His wanting to give her a child before leaving her to running off to be with old girlfriend and raise her two children made him look as if his own child's wellbeing was not important to him. It could have been so much more if he had at least shown some feeling being torn between his old girlfriend and his own child. I guess I would have felt better if he wasn't made to be so shallow through out the entire book until the last few pages.
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