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Returning Pride

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Most Helpful Favorable Review

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

I've waited for Iian's story. I was so excited to get my hands o

I've waited for Iian's story. I was so excited to get my hands on it, and I wasn't disappointed. WOW! Iian is HOT.
Steamy, hot, sexy Iian and Allison. This was a story I know I will be reading over and over again. I'm looking forward to reading the last book in the seri...
I've waited for Iian's story. I was so excited to get my hands on it, and I wasn't disappointed. WOW! Iian is HOT.
Steamy, hot, sexy Iian and Allison. This was a story I know I will be reading over and over again. I'm looking forward to reading the last book in the series.

posted by Jetgirl77 on June 16, 2013

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Most Helpful Critical Review

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Not Sure!

I love the town of Pride and the characters. The storylines are good. The sex is well written for the most part, inventive and hot! Almost too much sex and not enough story.

But..... some of the transitions are not smooth, the character is talking or thinking of som...
I love the town of Pride and the characters. The storylines are good. The sex is well written for the most part, inventive and hot! Almost too much sex and not enough story.

But..... some of the transitions are not smooth, the character is talking or thinking of some situation or problem and then we are off to another subject without developing the original one. Some storylines are left hanging.

And each book gets shorter, book 1 was 170+ pages, book 2 was 150+ pages and this book is 130+ pages. There was enough story left to add those additional pages. It feels like the author is tired of this series and is hurrying to get to the end so she can move on to another idea. Sorry, I don't want to be mean but I read a LOT of books and I like the premise behind these books. I just thought they deserved better.

posted by 4877384 on September 4, 2013

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 4, 2013

    Not Sure!

    I love the town of Pride and the characters. The storylines are good. The sex is well written for the most part, inventive and hot! Almost too much sex and not enough story.

    But..... some of the transitions are not smooth, the character is talking or thinking of some situation or problem and then we are off to another subject without developing the original one. Some storylines are left hanging.

    And each book gets shorter, book 1 was 170+ pages, book 2 was 150+ pages and this book is 130+ pages. There was enough story left to add those additional pages. It feels like the author is tired of this series and is hurrying to get to the end so she can move on to another idea. Sorry, I don't want to be mean but I read a LOT of books and I like the premise behind these books. I just thought they deserved better.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted June 3, 2014

    Good story

    If grammar errors drive you crazy, this is not for you!

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  • Posted March 21, 2014

    good story but too many mistakes

    I liked the story but really surprised on how many mistakes there are in the books. Yes, I only paid $2.99 for them. But I would of rather paid nothing for the 3 I purchased, because of all the mistakes in the books.
    I have read the series and have found numerous mistakes through out all the books. I am thinking how can they publish these and not see the mistakes. I have been thinking about writing to the author and let her know I would be glad to read her books before they go public to correct all the mistakes.
    There is one book left and I am not buying, due to fact I know there will be mistakes in it also.

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