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Posted February 23, 2013
Pretty good but...
I loved this story but what happened to the grammer? I find it VERY hard to believe that this creative story would have grammar issues when so much work was done!
I hope that the writer finds out about this and fixes it...
Anyways I DID enjoy the story that much. Very creative and I saw magic in ways that I never expected. I thank the author for the character Luna. She is quite the interesting female character and somewhat of a role model fighting the helpless female stereotype in a strong indepenent woman.
So I am not strict in grammar but that was what kept this story from perfect...
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Posted January 30, 2013
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