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Posted July 3, 2012
Okay book with weird alliterative paragraphs
This is an okay book for chick lit but the main character is really a slut. And what's with the weird alliterative paragraphs? In every chapter there are paragraphs where most of the words start with the same letters: deft, determined, delight, or understand, undetermined, and undermined. It's obviously deliberate and comes off as really fake.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted January 11, 2009
I really enjoyed the book "Inappropriate Men" by this author but not this one. The dialog is really stilted and many of the characters speak in the same "voice". Fun concepts and plot points but the mediocre writing takes away from it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.