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Did Not Enjoy This Book
I was terribly disappointed in this book. I thought the overall plot was interesting but thought the author failed her characters by not staying true to them. I mostly encountered this with her dialogue, which is the area where I had the most problem. I thought her dialogue was weak. I found myself encountering areas of dialogue where based on the characterization that she set up, didn't feel like the character would actually say it, which kept jolting me out of the story. In erotic romance, in my opinion, the dialogue is an important area where the author can stir your arousal. If a male says the right thing, it adds to the sexual tension and the readers anticipation of the erotic scene. I felt she didn't do justice to her male characters. I also did not enjoy her pacing. I thought her heroine was slobbery and I felt an extraordinary amount of author intrusion. A complete turn off. I tried to stay with the book, putting it down for days and coming back to it. I brought it to the tub with me at times to try to give it a fair chance, knowing that some books start out slow and pick up somewhere in the middle but then I just couldn't do it anymore. One day I just tossed it in the trash.
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Posted July 7, 2011
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