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Posted December 5, 2013
Not for me Honestly, this was one of my least favorite stories
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Honestly, this was one of my least favorite stories to read from the new Flirt line. Great premise, decent plot, but the writing was so not for me. Way too many “I” statements in a row (I did this. I did that. I walked here.), too much thesaurus diving at times and way way too many adjectives.
I’m sure there are people out there that will love the bit of romance between Colton and Emma – people that will appreciate talk of the surgical adhesive closing a head wound while the she’s running her fingers through his hair, will love that Emma felt like a hooker in the dress Colton picked out for her and thought about bathroom emergencies during their romantic dinner – but I’m not one of them.