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Posted May 23, 2012
Excellent story "idea" but poorly done. I found so many editing errors that I thought my eyes would bleed. ex. traitors NOT "traders",embraced NOT "embrassed", and Marines are NEVER referred to as "soldiers". they are NOT soldiers, they are UNITED STATES MARINES, (they would be referred to as 'marine',their last name or their rank)...and it the CORPS never ever the "core". these are only a FEW of the numerous errors. I deserve a gold star for sticking it out to the end of the story. excellent cover art though.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted October 30, 2012
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