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Posted March 10, 2013
I was disappointed
I kept trying to give this a chance because I knew it was based on real events and personal to the author. I wanted to say nice things about it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Unfortunately, the writing is very poorly executed and hard to follow to the point of being distracting. It would be OK if this were a first draft, but not as a final version one would charge people to read.
I couldn't finish it. Well, I guess I could have, but I didn't make myself. I hope the author takes more time in her future endeavors and gives her work the proper attention to detail and editing, and sees my review as the constructive criticism it is.
Posted February 25, 2012
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