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Posted December 31, 2013
Too wordy. It seems like James Robinson wanted to write a novel
It seems like James Robinson wanted to write a novel and someone attached a few pictures to it. Endless paragraphs that were totally irrelevant to the story became a drag on the reading of the story itself. The storyline and idea were good but poorly executed. Dangling plot lines that were meant to make you run out and buy volume 2. Not a chance.
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