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  • Posted December 14, 2014

    LibraryThing Book Review Desmond Carmichael's wife was brutally

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    Desmond Carmichael's wife was brutally murdered just over a year ago. He's now raising his four year old son Lucas as single parent. Recently strange things have been happening around Desmond that make him believe that his wife's killer is still on the loose. As these events continue to mount, Desmond goes on a fact finding mission to prove that the wrong man is in prison for his wife's death. The police believe that Desmond is making things up and move to take his son away. It appears that the killer is working his way to kill those he believes are responsible for his family's death.  Will Desmond be proven right? Who is the real killer? Your answers await you in Steel Breeze.

    Steel Breeze is an interesting mix of Japanese culture and murder. I love the story and characters! This book is what I call a page turner from first to last page couldn't wait to see what happens next. Definitely read more of this author's work in the future.

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  • Posted September 7, 2014

    Desmond has recently lost his wife to a brutal murder that was b

    Desmond has recently lost his wife to a brutal murder that was broadcasted all over the news, causing him to be center of attention in his local town. One day, when on a visit to the park with his young son Lucas, something odd happens. Desmond starts writing at a park bench just next to his son playing at the park with his dump truck. 

    One moment Lucas is there, and the next he's disappeared and only his dump truck is let behind. As Desmond desperately searches for his son, he finds him standing with a stranger, looking at the ducks in a stream near by. 

     Who is this stranger? Why would he be luring his son out from the playground to look at ducks? Desmond is sure that is somehow connected to his wife's murder, and could even possibly be the murderer himself. Immediately he takes his son to the detectives who worked his wife's murder, but the tables turn when they doubt his story and start insinuating that he is crazy. 

    There many little mysteries throughout the book, that will have you captivated in trying to solve them along side the characters. This was an especially fun book to read with a profusion of mystery, thrill and excitement all wrapped up in one. My favorite character was Desmond. His motivation and desire to solve all the unanswered questions in his life is remarkable. He's a great dad and will stop at nothing to protect him. 

    The chapters are separated by change between characters viewpoints which makes it remind me of how James Patterson writes. I'd gladly recommend this book to any of my friends. I give this book 5/5

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 18, 2013

    Excellent book kept me absorbed and terrified!

    Excellent book kept me absorbed and terrified!

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  • Posted August 10, 2013

         Desmond Carmichael had some baggage. He wife was brutally m

         Desmond Carmichael had some baggage. He wife was brutally murdered; beheaded by a Japanese Samurai sword that he owned. He drank too much. He was fired from his teaching job. And he had a four year old Lucas to take care of. But he was doing his best, and getting better. He quit drinking and was working on getting a second book published. He was paying the bills and keeping his head above water. Until Desmond found Lucas being led into the woods by a man in a Samurai  mask; a beheaded doll next to his toy truck in the sandbox; and a mystery haiku on his laptop computer. The local police wouldn't help, the Detective instead believing that Desmond was making it up for attention, or worse, had killed his wife a year earlier.
         Douglas Wynne's first novel, The Devil of Echo Lake, was the first place winner of the 2012 JournalStone Horror Fiction contest. Steel Breeze, a crime thriller, is his second, but no less deserving of high praise. The book had a little of almost everything a good thriller should: good cops and bad cops, leads and misleads, suspense and action, heroes and villains, vengeance, jealousy, even kidnapping. And of course, murder. Cold blooded. Unsuspected. Murder. All of which culminated in a climactic and page turning ending that left me satisfied. 

     And Steel Breeze  went a little deeper. The characters were a little more dynamic, facing choices that could take them from villain to hero in a second; from purposed, principled, disciplined to nothing but mass murderers; a bad cop who made bad decisions to a hero who sacrificed himself to save another; a father who was weak and beaten by circumstance or a father who gave it all to save the people he loved. There was potential from many of the characters, some met it and some didn't. 

         Even though the characters were dynamic and the story complex, there were some misses, too. Consider this dialogue between four year old Lucas and one of the antagonists:
    "I don't like it here. I want to go home."
    "Just rest, okay? Here, have some water."
    Lucas shook his head. "Are you a bad guy?"
    Bell considered the question..."I don't know."
    "My Daddy says bad guys usually think they're the good guys."
    Although short, it is one of my favorite exchanges in the book. It implies so much about what could have been explored, that good and bad are not always exclusive; that even murder and murderers are complex. Lots of stories have been told from the point of view of a righteous killer or outlaw. Fewer have told a story from both perspectives, leaving readers torn between who should succeed. That opportunity could have been realized. Instead, the passage quoted above was just a glimpse of what could have taken Steel Breeze from a good to great thriller.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 1, 2013

    I was very entertained by this book!  It definitely was differen

    I was very entertained by this book!  It definitely was different then what I was expecting, which was a great surprise!   I liked how the author drew me in to the story and I found myself many times in Desmond's shoes and felt his worries!  I liked the way this book made me feel uneasy and on the edge because of how the plot unveiled!  I haven't yet read Mr. Wynne's previous novel the Devil of Echo Lake but will definitely be adding it to my must read list!  Overall a very solid novel with lots to keep you entertained!  I look forward to more novels from Mr. Wynne!

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    Posted December 8, 2013

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