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40 out of 49 people found this review helpful.
She does it again!!!
FIRST WITH BITTEN AND NOW STOLEN THE AUTHOR CREATES A FUN AND EXCITING STIRY ONLY TO LEAVE US HANGING AND WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!
posted by 16575192 on January 14, 2012
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72 out of 105 people found this review helpful.
Just wow.
I literally had to force myself to finish this short book. The grammar is absolutely horrendous and not just here and there. Every single page has something terribly wrong with it. Examples you ask? "Her hair was tied enviously in a high ponytail"..."why did she felt th...
I literally had to force myself to finish this short book. The grammar is absolutely horrendous and not just here and there. Every single page has something terribly wrong with it. Examples you ask? "Her hair was tied enviously in a high ponytail"..."why did she felt the need to leave"..."one thousand of centuries ago"..."Ally could not have thought of things getting any worst."..."Although, she knew that she now nothing was visible, she definitely still felt a presence."
Honestly, I know that its hard to write and put yourself out there but don't you have a 12 year old neighbor who can proofread your stuff before you publish it? At times I was embarrassed for this author.
Honestly, I know that its hard to write and put yourself out there but don't you have a 12 year old neighbor who can proofread your stuff before you publish it? At times I was embarrassed for this author.
posted by Jenney on March 12, 2012
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Anonymous
Posted March 12, 2012
Just wow.
I literally had to force myself to finish this short book. The grammar is absolutely horrendous and not just here and there. Every single page has something terribly wrong with it. Examples you ask? "Her hair was tied enviously in a high ponytail"..."why did she felt the need to leave"..."one thousand of centuries ago"..."Ally could not have thought of things getting any worst."..."Although, she knew that she now nothing was visible, she definitely still felt a presence."
Honestly, I know that its hard to write and put yourself out there but don't you have a 12 year old neighbor who can proofread your stuff before you publish it? At times I was embarrassed for this author.72 out of 105 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted January 14, 2012
She does it again!!!
FIRST WITH BITTEN AND NOW STOLEN THE AUTHOR CREATES A FUN AND EXCITING STIRY ONLY TO LEAVE US HANGING AND WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!
40 out of 49 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 11, 2012
Ok story, needs work.
Good story, but the Author needs tobrush up on grammer and vocabulary. Worth reading if you can look past the errors in tense, punctuation, spelling and word choice.
39 out of 50 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 25, 2012
These books are amazing, a great story line, but DOES need to be
These books are amazing, a great story line, but DOES need to be edited better. Bitten and Stolen are good reads in my opinion, but she needs to get the third one out NOW! She either needs to find someone to edit for her, or do a better job herself. The books would be more enjoyable if she would get her stuff together.
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Anonymous
Posted March 10, 2012
Luv it
Write the next book already!!!!!!!!
27 out of 31 people found this review helpful.
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emtswife
Posted February 8, 2012
Highly Recommend series
I have enjoyed both books and cannot wait to see how it all works out in the end. I truly just cannot put these down and eagerly awiat the next installment.
23 out of 27 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 20, 2012
Stolen
The story in this book may be a good one, but I couldn't ignore the horrid grammar. Seriously, when you have to read the same sentence repeatedly, and then still not understand it, that is just bad editing. Some errors are to be expected, but I just could't finish the book.pppr
15 out of 20 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted May 17, 2012
Hurry
Hurry and write the next book already!!! Im DYING to read what happens next!!!! --A--
13 out of 14 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted June 4, 2012
Agreed.
I fully agree with the grammar reviews. I, myself, am 12 years of age. I found most of the grammar errors to be something that is VERY hard to miss. The books have an interesting plot, but they definetly are in severe need to be edited. Oh, and the first 60 pages of book one sounded like they were written by a twelve year old. I am in gifted classes, so I often am required to do some peer editing, and I fully understand what my peer's writing styles are. I hope for the third book to be released to BN because the second book ended so abruptly. As I said, I like the books, but the grammar is horrible.
But... I do understand it was free.12 out of 15 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 31, 2012
Longing for 3rd book
These stories may be short but they keep you on the edge of your seat and you can t put the book down. I really wished i had not started reading until the third book was out cause i m very impatient. Can t wait. Debbie
12 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 6, 2012
Excellent Read
Really enjoyed Bitten and Stolen. Can't wait for the next one! Packed with so much excitement and suspense, and great characters! I hope the next one is longer.
10 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted January 23, 2012
More please
Wow this was good. I need to read the next one. Wish i knew it was not out yet i may have waited. Hurry please
9 out of 13 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted October 6, 2012
Love love love
Love this book... i do not care about the grammer and everything else because i was so focused on what was going on that i didnt even notice them... can not wait for the third book to come out... hurry up please...
I am not one to write reviews but i just feel terrible about others comments. You are a great writer... thank you for the awesome book...7 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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SallyBNC
Posted April 18, 2012
The second book in this series was just as good as the first but
The second book in this series was just as good as the first but again somewhat disappointed being left with a massive cliffhanger and no indication when the final installment will be available. That being said be prepared for roller coaster ride of emotions from fear, to hope to downright frustration and disappointment.
5 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 10, 2012
I cant wait for the third book in this series!
I cant wait for the third book in this series!
5 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted January 30, 2012
Really enjoyed
Love the series....
5 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 7, 2013
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Bitten and Stolen are amazing! I was captivated from the start. I am not a grammar freak and i barely noticed the mistakes, i was too obsessed with the story line. I can't wait for the last book to be released.
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 10, 2012
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Too short....
4 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 6, 2012
Great series
I really have enjoyed this series and can't wait for the next book.
4 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 24, 2012
Loved it
Might have been better if it were longer but it is 161 pages sooooooo..............
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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