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Posted May 20, 2013
I really do love this story!! the only thing keeping me from giv
I really do love this story!! the only thing keeping me from giving it a 5 is that 1. the writing seems a little elementary to me it just didn't seem to really develop 2. to me it felt like Emma acted like a 13 year old instead of 16/17 year old. It also jumped around so much from month to month that I didn't feel ike I really got to know the characters well enough and it didn't go in depth enough to REALLY pull me in all the way. Don't get me wrong I love the idea of the story and did enjoy it, it just wasn't one of those that really pulled me into the characters life. Also, sadly alot of mements just seem cheesy and that's probably because it just jumps around so much and doesn't really go into a lot of detail of moments between the characters. I really can't grasp the relationship between James and Emma because frankly there aren't any lasting moments between them, it's like he came, he declared his love, we kissed, he left. But on repeat. All in all, I will complete the series but mainly because it's a decent story not because it's really pulled me in.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.