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Posted December 18, 2008
Unfocused and uninspired
I am also not a fan of the first person point of view present tense. It really keeps you from getting into the story. The writer consistently told instead of showed. The story was boring, unfocused, and none of the dialogue flowed naturally. It felt like the writer wanted the fact that vampires were involved to carry the story instead of a solid plot.
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Posted September 8, 2009
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