- Shopping Bag ( 0 items )
Posted July 6, 2014
This story had so much innternal dialog that it became boring. The one sex scene was not very good. I wonder about the age of the writer because the plot was so stupid and juvenile. Honestly, who says "go all the way" except teenagers and even they do not say that any more. Sorry to say this 90 page story was bad. Even for free, this was not worth it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.