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Posted July 30, 2013
Is this the first part of a series? It just stopped without an
Is this the first part of a series? It just stopped without an ending. Hard to read - lack of punctuation, lots of grammatical and spelling errors. Could have used an editor. The story didn't flow well.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.