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Posted September 15, 2013
Too many superfluous words. Badly in need of an edit
All I can guess is the author thought he was being paid by the word. No detail left undescribed, usually with 2 or 3 adjectives. Every movement had to be articulated inexcruciating detail. The story was predictable, the characters even more so. Skip it.
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