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Posted September 1, 2013
I enjoyed the plot. When it came to the writing though I almost
I enjoyed the plot. When it came to the writing though I almost stopped reading after a few pages. I found myself changing it as I read it so that it would be make more sense. There are a few parts in the story where it looked like the author was going to take a sentence in one direction then went in another but the first part of the sentence was left there. The mistakes that were made were obvious ones that any good proof reader should have picked up on. Like I said the story has a good plot, it is great for a quick read but only if you are not picky about grammar. I will not be purchasing the 2nd book.
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Posted September 4, 2013
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