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Posted January 24, 2000
Good Storyline, Needed Another Edit
I confess that this is one of those books that when I finished, I was happy I read it. The one thing that disturbed me, however, is that I thought that the book needed another edit. Some of the transitions were non existent. In some areas, I felt that the author had gotten tired of a particular subject, topic or chapter and just decided to conclude. Before anyone, or the Author, gets upset, I have the same problem with John Grisham books. I sense he gets tired and wants to end. And I like his books also.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.