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Posted October 5, 2011
Exciting Science Fiction/Romance, But ....
Schroeder is great at character development; Lou, Jared and Sam are all well-rounded and sympathetic, with great backstories. Unfortunately, Jared's introduction is one long, awkward info dump of a paragraph; he could have been much more smoothly introduced into the story. The identity of the villain also comes out of nowhere; there is no build up to his appearance. Additionally, the text is marred my repetitive turns of phrase. Those complaints aside, "The Last Detail" is a fun, fast read with some great menage scenes.
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Posted April 22, 2012
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