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Posted December 25, 2012
Good, but could be better
I liked the overall plot of this book and the character personalities were good if not a bit predictable. However the grammar and spelling was so bad it often times pulled me away from it and got really annoying. I was able to get past it and reach the end of the book which was good but seemed to wrap up pretty quick despite the arduous adventure of the cast. I also found it to be a bit more vulgar and raunchy than I was expecting in parts that didn't seem to fit well in the story in my opinion. The author did a great job of depicting the battle scenes as they were easily imagined in my mind. Like I said this book was a good read but an experienced editor would have been nice.
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