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Posted February 5, 2013
Posted February 10, 2013
Very interesting begining. I cannot wait to read the novel. Two small problems. On page 18 Sullivan is talking to Sarah and says "No, we're not head to war." He should say "headed". Also, when Sullivan and the children sing "Happy Birthday" to Sara the song was not written until 1893 and since the Civil War started in 1861 it was kind of impossible.
I do not mean to be picky, but since you asked for reader reviewsto help make this into a book, and I enjoyed very much what I have so far read, I thought I would share the two problems I did have with it.
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Posted January 30, 2013
Posted February 24, 2013
Posted December 11, 2013
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Wonderful output.i was amazed at how good it really was.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
What i loved most is that it is typically based on a true story.
I think the Author has done a great job in his work and should procced in making this a novel.
It wasn't at all what i thought it would be, it turned yo be someething much much better.
I enjoyed this very much and highly reccomend it. ^_^
Posted August 2, 2013