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The Wide Awake Loons

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  • Posted August 13, 2013

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    Reviewed by Bobbie Grob for Readers' Favorite Wide Awake Loons

    Reviewed by Bobbie Grob for Readers' Favorite

    Wide Awake Loons by Katherine L. Holmes is not quite a coming-of-age story, and not quite an adventure. It is the tale of one summer at the lake and the everyday life of vacation. The uniqueness of this story is that it tells the tale through two different sets of eyes. One set belongs to the humans who summer on the island, and the other set belongs to a pair of loons who soon become a family of five. As Ginny and Nettie are impatient with the restrictions placed on them by their families, so too are the loonlings impatient with their slowly improving abilities to fish and then to fly. The stories of the loons and the humans dance around each other, intertwining so many times that it is clear that this particular summer will not be forgotten.

    When I began reading Wide Awake Loons, I immediately recalled my own childhood in northern Minnesota. The loons have a call like no other, and Ms. Holmes did a wonderful job of capturing their ethereal beauty and charm. The only problem I had with the story was that it just wasn’t quite enough. No one changed enough to call this a coming-of-age tale, and the story really did lack excitement. Ms. Holmes writes beautifully; her prose was both stunning and clever, and she shared the loons’ story very convincingly. However, I feel that this book will not hold the attention of its intended audience as well as it could. If Ms. Holmes wants to market this story to older readers, then I think it would be much more appreciated. It truly is a beautifully written book.

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  • Posted July 12, 2013

    I had a very hard time rating this one. Parts of it are very go

    I had a very hard time rating this one. Parts of it are very good, parts need work, but the hard part in rating was differentiating between the two stories. Half the story is told from the loons' perspective, half is from the kids. I thought that I wouldn't like the loons' story as much, because I'm not big on making animals sound like humans, but I ended up more intrigued with the loons' story than the kids, up until the end. So I had to rate the two stories almost differently and then average the ratings out for my final review.

    The story is set on a lake in the summer, and the author captured the feel of the place beautifully. Her descriptions of the lake and the people and the animals were the best parts of this story. By the end of it, I really wanted to go stay in a log cabin on a lake somewhere! This alone makes the story worth reading.

    The story following the loons and other island animals is very well done, right up until the end. At the end, the male loon gets caught by a fishing lure and the other animals figure out how to get him unstuck. I thought this was a little too unrealistic, and would much rather have seen the kids rescue the loon, not another animal. The book lost a little credibility there.

    The ending did feel a little rushed, and I got a bit confused with some of the human characters, especially at the beginning. But I decided to give this a 4 star simply because I enjoyed the story and I thought some of the descriptions were really well done. I think this story would be fun for kids and nostalgic for adults to read.

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