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Posted September 21, 2012
First it's short, 78/79 pages. Second, just when you finally get into the story, it's over. It is well written, and gives you a nice feel for the characters, but ends abruptly leaving you hanging, a literary device which is quickly losing it's appeal with readers these days. Why not take these serial chapters and put them together and actually write a book?
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