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Posted April 8, 2008
A lot of potential wasted
Coming from a fellow high school student, I had high hopes for this book. I expected a lot from it and some of its potential came through. Most of it hasn't. It seems like he had a good initial idea for the plot, but it slowly devolves into an adolescent fantasy resembling that coming from a random video game. The characters seemed like an attempt at satire, but came out too serious. Also, the lack of character development hurt this book's already present flaws. The over abundance of weaponry and 'over-the-top' action was ridiculous. I feel very disappointed at the lack of follow through on the potential.
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