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Posted May 11, 2013
Good but could have been great.
It was an okay story with the makings of a storyline that could have been great. People are flawed and real and the characters revealed that however the shaping and handling of the story as it progressed was weird and the timing of the story just plain awful. Becka's actions with Kyle ruined the likeability of her character and made her unenderable. Also, with the character of Nate. His side of the story was never presented in an understandable way so his actions were just cruel and he was seen as mean and unlikeable. If the main heroine and hero of a story are not likeable why care what happens to them? It made the book hard to want to finish. The pace was slow and never went where the story could have went. Then at the end nate miraculously comes to his senses for no rhyme or well explained reason and she excepts it like a dishrag with no backbone. The ending was like a nascar race hurried and the story suffered. It was a great storyline with a potentially wonderful story to unravel but not used properly. I was left baffled at the squandered opportunity. Too bad I could see so much more that could have come out of these characters. Kinda sad.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.