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Vampire Apocalypse: A World Torn Asunder (Book 1)

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Most Helpful Favorable Review

6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

Good writer needs good editor

I enjoyed this tale of a post WWIII Earth dominated by vampire masters and their underling thralls; however, I was a little disappointed at the lack of good editing and typos throughout. The underlying plot & character building is great if you can get over the "rough dr...
I enjoyed this tale of a post WWIII Earth dominated by vampire masters and their underling thralls; however, I was a little disappointed at the lack of good editing and typos throughout. The underlying plot & character building is great if you can get over the "rough draft" nature of this book.

posted by lifeguardzac on February 14, 2012

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Most Helpful Critical Review

26 out of 27 people found this review helpful.

Don't bother!!

Wow, this book was an absolute mess! It would appear the author didn't even bother using spellcheck before publishing this disaster. It was almost painful to read given the extent of the grammatical errors alone! Although there were chapters, he didn't bother separatin...
Wow, this book was an absolute mess! It would appear the author didn't even bother using spellcheck before publishing this disaster. It was almost painful to read given the extent of the grammatical errors alone! Although there were chapters, he didn't bother separating the different scenes within, so it was extremely confusing as the action and dialogue jumped from one location to another. I found it very difficult to keep track of all the characters, especially when half of them were named Jack or John, and because sometimes he'd actually mix the names up (ie calling Sandra "Sarah"). The underlying story really isn't that bad, but it was so poorly executed I cannot bear to finish this trilogy. Someone needs to get this guy an editor!!

posted by paradise9999 on March 2, 2012

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  • Anonymous

    Posted February 14, 2012

    Good writer needs good editor

    I enjoyed this tale of a post WWIII Earth dominated by vampire masters and their underling thralls; however, I was a little disappointed at the lack of good editing and typos throughout. The underlying plot & character building is great if you can get over the "rough draft" nature of this book.

    6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 30, 2012

    Good story line

    As i read many new writers i look past editing & typos. I really enjoyed the plot & charactor developement. This is an enjoyable read & i look forward to reading more of his novels.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 21, 2012

    Loved it

    This is more of a novel about the enduring spirit of humanity using vampires to set the tone. It is very well written and a welcome change to the genre.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 1, 2013

    Thats my man!!!

    ~QueenReenelle ;p

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  • Anonymous

    Posted February 2, 2013

    Awesome

    Amazing book. Love the series. Wish the spelling was a little better. Can't wait for the next book.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 30, 2013

    Great

    I love it. I have read it multipale times.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 14, 2013

    Great story

    As for you who judge this writer I you try and do a better job. This writer was not afraid to write this book. Best of luck on all the books you write. I will keep looking for your name. Thank 's alot I'll pass this a long.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 28, 2012

    Good read

    Wow, this book was great for a free read if you can get over the writing mistakes.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 19, 2012

    Loved

    Could not put down. Great series of books. Would like a fourth book for my NOOK.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 22, 2012

    could not put down

    I really enjoyed the book and am looking forward to reading the rest of the series. You will have to pay attention since it does skip from one character to another without notice.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 14, 2012

    CREEPY

    My K-9 TEETH LOOK KINDA LIKE THE SUPER CREEPPPPPPYYYYY

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  • Anonymous

    Posted July 9, 2012

    LOVED IT!!!!!!!

    I just finished the last book and loved it. I hope there are more books to come. I am totaly hooked pn the series. Can't waot for the rest to come, if there is more.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted June 22, 2012

    Loved it.

    Justvfinished the fist one and loved it. I can't wait to read this next two.

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  • Posted June 21, 2012

    I enjoyed this book it was an easy read and a change from all th

    I enjoyed this book it was an easy read and a change from all the good vampires fell in love with girl type books.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted June 14, 2012

    Ivy

    I want to chat on here and my name is ashley the 2nd book is bogus!!!!! It costs money tyas jank

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  • Anonymous

    Posted May 27, 2012

    Fast moving and I enjoyed it....

    I will the next book....

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  • Anonymous

    Posted May 23, 2012

    Not bad

    Liked the story line of these books. Think a lot more could have gone in to them and maybe more books to follow.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 18, 2012

    Vampire book

    Awesome if your looking for a action vampire book this for down load it is free.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 11, 2012

    Great story

    Fabulous

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 8, 2012

    Great plot

    I really enjoyed reading this story. A lot of interesting twists. Hooked on the characters. Can not wait to read the next book in the series.

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