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Posted May 12, 2014
Based on the summary of this book, it's very clear that you need
Based on the summary of this book, it's very clear that you need to go back and do a great deal of research. It's great that you're interestedWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
in Japan, and want to write books set there, but without knowing your setting, you won't get very far. For one, Tochigi City is not an island.
Tochigi is a prefecture in the middle of Honshu, and prior to about 1868, the prefecture was called Shimotsuke. Prior to 1876, the age of
majority in Japan is considered to have been around 15 for boys, 13 for girls. Unlike in the modern-day U.S., the age of 18 has no special
status in Japan; the current age of majority is 20. Almost everything else about this summary seems completely unreasonable, but having
not read the book itself, I'm not going to argue those points. Barring your lack of research, I'd encourage you to reach out to an editor,
who will point out spelling errors like "destine" ("destiny") and help you use correct grammar. I really really don't think you should be
having people pay to read this.