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Posted August 7, 2008
DO NOT WASTE MONEY ON THIS
Do not waste money on this book!! This author tries very diligently to inject what she perceives to be 'prose' into her story, but if you lose your readers in the process, how good is your writing ability? I could only stand to read the first 100 pages realizing that I was wasting time on something that was plain old dreck when I could be reading something intelligent that made some sense. An example of this awful prose is as follows: 'I looked at the car speeding next to us a plain girl with glasses on the end of her nose frowned and hunched forward. She cut us off and Rene muttered a soft curse. American pop music came out of her car in a blur. Ossifer. Love's desire. Huge office complexes sat silent in fields brimming with bright green desire. The queen knelt before a guillotine. Blood shot from her neck in a hot stream. The next day her blood stained the street and people walked on it now her head was gone and she could be part of life.' WHAT THE HECK DOES THAT MEAN????? (This is an exact paragraph, I did not type anything out of context.) Also, I am not a prude, but this author LOVES inserting the 'C' word every single chance she gets, even calling men that name. She also is hung up (excuse the pun) on genitalia and self gratification. She writes of very dismal sexual, drug laden events such as a sadomasochist club. She flits from present to past to far past faster than you can bat an eye. And all the while the titled character Veronica is hardly ever mentioned. From other reviews I've read, I find that she doesn't mention Veronica much until the end of the book. I think any favorable reviews that this book may receive come from people who mistake the inane prose and pornographic references as 'art'. Sometimes people don't want to admit that they just didn't get it either. If you want to read an incredible book covering the same topic of AIDS, but written with beautiful, intelligent, comprehensible prose, then read: 'Sarah's Song: A True Story of Love and Courage' by Janice A. Burns. There's no comparison between the two books.
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Posted February 11, 2014
Mary Gaitskill is a a plagiarist. She lifted the names, theme,
Mary Gaitskill is a a plagiarist. She lifted the names, theme, etc. from an unknown writer.
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