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Posted December 7, 2013
The story is very good, and told very well. It's intriguing and
The story is very good, and told very well. It's intriguing and very good. My problem is, the ending isn't great. It's awkward and rushed, and it feels like the author had a bunch of ideas and didn't want to get rid of any, so she threw them all in.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
And the couplings at the end are both awkward and without chemistry, and sort of come out of nowhere and don't really fit with the rest of the story