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Posted September 19, 2012
This flash story was only about nine pages long, after I got through all the preliminaries. It had no ending. The reader was left completely out in the cold. There was no back story, no detail, no anything. A preacher's wife was beside herself with family problems, stated what the problems were and then ...poof.....the end, no resolution no nothing. At least what little there was spelled and punctuated correctly. I was terribly disapponted in this flash story. Not worth my time.
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Posted March 30, 2013