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Posted September 25, 2013
I read the series and it was just ok. The storyline is good but the writer needs to add more details. There are barely any descriptions of anyone or places. It is hard to picture what she is talking about if you dont know what the characters and places looks like.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Also it needs a fact checker and editor. Some of the gramner is wrong. the most glaring incorrct fact is when she mentions the Packers and Giants are in the Super Bowl, That isnt possible. Many scenes are hard to follow from the vague descriptions used. In one scene I couldn't tell if someone fell down or fell off a cliff. Another i wasn't sure if a couple had sex or if they slept in separate rooms.
Posted September 11, 2013
The series as a while is pretty good, but a have read far better books from emerging or unheard of authors that were cheaper than 3.99. Also, i noticed in this and another book in the series the author got her own facts wrong. The sister had a boy and in the next chapter she calls the baby a girl in another book she establishes the guy lives in house only too call it an apartment later on. Also there really are no sex scenes it's implied when she wakes up in the guys need the next morning.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.