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Posted October 13, 2013
Posted November 4, 2013
This story had a good base and a different twist on witches, etc
This story had a good base and a different twist on witches, etc., but depth and storyline lacked significantly. Conversations between characters were long and drawn out unnecessarily in what seemed an effort to create rich and interesting characters, but only ended up seeming like the writing was voluminous in certain areas to make up for a lack of imagination of putting anything else in the story. Things moved too fast and didn't really flow or make sense. Why was Niall in town to begin with? Did people know about supernatural beings, just some people, or none at all? What was the purpose of the coven, the history of it, etc.? It left a lot of unanswered questions and underdeveloped characters and circumstances. The story had great potential, but really crashed and burned.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.