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"31 Horrifying Tales from the Dead Volume 2"
by Author Drac Von Stoller.
Posted December 30, 2012
The ideas are good but each story lacks character development and the plot follows the most obvious thread. I worked my way through four of the tales in the hopes of improvement. Mr. Von Stoller needs to put more effort into creating characters that are more rounded and less two dimensional. Continued repetition of the same words and phrases makes the narration ponderous and lacking in depth. Reworking these stories so that the characters have enough substance to engage the reader would help tremendously. Shrouding the plot line with a little mystery and including enough detail to allow for the possibility of alternate endings will let the reader be surprised when the truth is revealed.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.