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Posted June 27, 2013
If u r a man...you know nothing of gays in service and u sound like a 10year old who wants to be a famous or ur fantacies areimpeded due to lack of maturety. If u r a woman /gay or not what a disrespectable disservice u do. Ur characters were portrayed like bubble gum chewing teens . All ur characters came across as immature. The "swells" "gees" . The gazilllon ! Marks behind every "ok!" "Are yyou okay!!? U have a very long way to go,but if ur goiing to write anything about do some research. No soldier gay or straight would act like u have them. I'm offended on how u protrayed men and women who put their lives at risk while ur in the comfort of safety. U are most likely a good person who may need more life experiences before becoming a decent writer.