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Posted February 21, 2014
This has the potential to be a good story and a decent read except the spelling is horrible, the author repeats things too often, and the phrasing made it nearly impossible to stick with it. I get the feeling that it either is a true story or is based on a true story but the emotion felt by the author appears to have gotten in the way of their being able to articulate a clear story. If it is edited and cleaned up it would be worth reading but not until it is seriously cleaned upWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted January 22, 2013
Be prepared for quite a few grammatical errors. Broken and all over the place thoughts and descriptions make this a very hard read.
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Posted March 2, 2013
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