A Day of an Eternal Soul

A Day of an Eternal Soul

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by Steven Wilkerson
     
 

Rachel coming home from a trip home for the holidays that went bad meets a mysteries man that does not remember his past appears right in front of her. She takes it upon herself to help him and discover his past that could end up costing her life.

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Rachel coming home from a trip home for the holidays that went bad meets a mysteries man that does not remember his past appears right in front of her. She takes it upon herself to help him and discover his past that could end up costing her life.

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ISBN-13:
2940033120536
Publisher:
Steven Wilkerson
Publication date:
03/25/2012
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
File size:
141 KB

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A Day of an Eternal Soul 2.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It may turn out to be a good story. I just can't stand the constant stumbling about among all the errors.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Terrible grammar and spelling. The story line is not thought out. The book is way to short and kind of just stopd with no explanation. It seems like it is a book idea instead of a book. It isn't worth reading.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Good plot. But missing so much you get lost/confused. Ending leaves absolutely no explanation to so many things that its almost frustrating... Yet I couldn't put it down while reading it, ;)
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Th book horrible. The grammar mistakes are so bad. Do nt waste your time.
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Yes this book has many grammar and spelling errors and the plot isnt well thought out but i love the story line it needs to be longer it seems like they thought about writing the book then got bored with it and just hurryed to finish it i just wwish it was longer
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This was awful. Just awful. The characters were not believable in any way. I could not relate to anyone in the book. Frankly, I am surprised that this novella is rated so high. They must be friends of the authors. Well get new friends because they are lying to you. Let's go over this piece by piece. Angel and angle are two different words with two different meanings. PLEASE learn the difference. Of and For are two different words as well. Similar but not the same. When writing please keep the same tense. One minute it's in the present tense, but then in the same sentence it reverts back to past tense. The reader often gets disrupted and loses track of time within the story when tenses are confused and mixed up. That needs fixing as well. Pacing: the first 50 pages were spent talking about nothing. They come up with no conclusions about this man or his identity. Then all of a sudden a woman who just happpens to be eating chinese takeout in the mall cafeteria right next to them, is now chacing them. How convenient of that woman to just appear right when the plot was getting too dull for words. There was no mention of her before hand, no strange car sightings outside of her complex, nothing to warn the reader of a change. Believability: First off, no one and I mean not a single person would let a strange man sleep in their house after he appeared naked from a blue light in a public laundry. And the rationale is that perhaps he is an alien from outerspace sent to save the Earth so she can't possibly call the police. Wow. I should have known then that this was going to turn out bad. Secondly, Kenneth (the evil antagonist) has some sort of epiphany after sleeping with this girl that he is evil and wants to break her. Not bad, but pointless since she is already a mindless idiot who doesn't check her facts. She spent two days with this man after his "awakening" and didn't notice a thing was off. He would have been acting strangely in some sense if he was so very evil. Overall, not a good read even for free. I would rate less than one star if I could.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Lots of grammer errors. Wished it was longer
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It was good but there were a lot of grammer mistakes that were hard to ignore.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Good thought out plot. Excellent twist at the end. Not boring at all. Very orgimial.