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Posted July 12, 2013
I agree with another reviewer that this book could have benefitted from a "less is more" approach. (When you selfpublish, as the author did with this third book of the series, maybe you are allowed to go on and on.) The bones of the story were enjoyable, though the padding tended to slow its action.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted June 29, 2013
The author tends to go on... I mean really, nobody goes on about their feelings the way these characters do. There's nothing held back in the love scenes, either, which I think would be more compelling if authors would occasionally utilize the forgotten fade-to-black device. I've read much worse, though.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.