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Posted February 21, 2011
Cecilia has a wonderful imagination! I love short stories, and these are just the right size! However, they can be difficult to read due to a lack of basic editing. Cecilia, Sweety, please add some apostrophes to your contractions. "shed" should be "she'd". Some phrases are clumpedTogetherWithNoSpacesLikeThis, causing a roadblock in your reading.
The stories are definitely erotic, but many are girl-on-girl, and one is invalid-man-on-male beast! I would have liked to have seen a few more traditional, old fashioned, vampiress-on-guy stories. Still good reading though.
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