- Shopping Bag ( 0 items )
Posted August 24, 2013
The -um- style of the writing for this story sits somewhere between "outline" and "synopsis". It's sadly lacking in detail, character devopment, or even plot flow. The herky-jerky pace of the story had me going "Huh?" a bunch of times. Too bad too - with an interesting assortment of misfits to fill out a rather predictable "misfits make good" story line, there was potential there.
It needed more meat on the bones.