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Anonymous
Posted December 27, 2011
Promising outline but the story wasn't flushed out well. Super cheesy, poor dialogue, too fast pacing, and unrealistic actions by the characters.
6 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 24, 2011
Love this book!!
5 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 26, 2011
The grammar and editing was God awful! The storyline is
really good in theory, but the writer butchered it. Tizzy really just started to become annoying, Grant was weak, and Branson was creepy and pushy! There was a line said by Grant, "Becky, girl,...". I dont know any convincingly straight guy that says "girl". I tried so hard to like it but i couldnt push myself to continue past pg 176. It came to the point where i didnt even care what happened to the characters.
4 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 1, 2011
Loved the story and characters. Some editing is still needed regarding punction, spelling, and grammer.
4 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 22, 2012
Very sweet and predictable romance. Nice, clean story
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 8, 2012
Poorly written and ridiculous. It should be in the humor section because it actually made me laugh out loud several times!
3 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 27, 2011
Good read but a little annoyed with the poor editing work.
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 14, 2012
Is it ok for 13 year olds??????
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 10, 2012
This book to me was really a great read.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 10, 2012
Unlikely heroine you end up rooting for
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 8, 2012
Great book good romance. One thing i would like to say is there were a few editing mistakes but not to were the book was unreadable. The grammer was much too proper for people speaking. But all in all i would like to say it doesn't matter how the words were spelt or phrased its the fact that the words are there that matters. It was quite quick to get to the point but it was a beautiful book that i enjoyed reading. I recommend this book to all who are love-sick. ~ Tibby
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 2, 2012
I really enjoyed the story, but it could really use some serious editing.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 2, 2012
Best book i have ever read,free,and wonderfu.i couldnt wait to finish read iy
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 29, 2012
It was a cute story and it wasnt the editing. It takes place in australia so some of the words are spelled differently...
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 27, 2012
Wonderful story of overcoming obstacles and fighting for a love meant to be and accepting meddlesome cupids!
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 27, 2012
I wasn't expecting a lot with this free book but I found myself very drawn into this story. The heartbreaking story of the heroine make you root for her to overcome her self-imposed boundaries & allow herself this love.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 24, 2012
I recomend this. No wrond stuff. Awesome ending.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 26, 2011
If you can get past the grammatical errors and overlook how some parts seemed a bit rushed, you will truly enjoy this wonderfully romantic Cinderella story. The author should get some help editing and re-release, as the storyline is great.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 26, 2011
Love it
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 25, 2011
At first I was not too sure about this book, but I now have to say what a great story this was. About over coming the battles a person faces and a love that keeps for all time. Read it and you will not be disappointed.
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Overview
'A woman who could not forget her past, and a man who would not give up on their future -Tizzy McKenzie a shy but talented consultant in an advertising agency loved her work. She had a wonderful boss in Grant Mallaby and a great friend in Becky Whitman. And then one morning she gave him a lift and suddenly their sensible world is turned upside down.And that was before the 'cupids' stepped in.