After The Abduction - The Title is Better Than The Story Unfortunately...
I am an avid reader of historical romance noverls for 20 years now (since high school). I stopped reading for years as the plots, characters and authors were getting boring. I started reading again this year and selected many authors based upon reviews I read. I picked up a book earlier by Sabrina Jefferies - One Night With a Price - and it was pretty good. I enjoyed the characters, story line and plot very much. I expected the same in After The Abduction. Unfortunately...I never connected with the characters much - mostly Juliet. The plot line itself was fine but, the way the characters interacted -especially the hero Sebastian and heroine - Juliet was just lacking for me. For one thing the novel goes on and on about how naive, innocent, beguiling and sweet Juliet was just 2 years before but, after the abduction she suddenly is worldy, suspicious, tough and almost mean sometimes. She admits the worse thing that happened during this abduction was being away from her family, the smuggler giving her one kiss and then bad gossip for a bit upon her return. Once Juliet meets up with Sebastian again and trys to get him to admit he was the smuggler who took her before - she is so in his face that it almost becomes irritating. She is constantly challenging him on everything and to be honest, this was not an appealing part of her character. Why Sebastian didn't find this equally maddening is beyond me - he clearly found her good looking and hot enough to try and seduce but, her constant nagging drove me crazy. It was not until late in the book after they got together that she finally started to settle down and become a likeable character to me. Although some scences are interesting - him teaching her to shoot, his putting her on a pedastal, when they played chess and 'John Thomas' sprung to life etc. were fine - it just wasn't enough to draw me in that they were creating a chemistry AND a relationship. I want to see passion and intensity and growth of characters toward each other - these two developed too much outside of their relationship for me to be convinced of things. I didn't think some parts of the book worked good - such as 1) they lie to each other from the beginning to try and fish out information they need -not appealing 2) they become intimate off and on in different ways throughout the book yet - never really seem to like or respect each other until late 3)he won't say he loves her until practically the last page -this is irritating 4) we never meet the mysterious twin brother Morgan until the epilogue and there is no way to connect to someone so late in a novel 5) they are apart for two years after the abduction yet, seemingly don't miss each other all that much in the time away yet, magically become re-enthralled with each other upon her visit to his home again???? Some of these things just didn't work for me. I would have preferred things to flow better so, I could connect everything more smoothly. Also...the author disclosed early on that Sebastian was in fact the same abductor who took Juliet two years earlier so...no mystery there. I would have liked to see the author draw the reader in a bit more in parts like that. In some ways, Sebastians Uncle and Juliet's sister and brother-in law are more appealing than this couple was at times. I wish I could give this book better reviews but, it just didn't work good for me until way too late. I think from the authors other book she is clearly talented so, I'll just put this book aside and continue to hope I find other good ones by her as I did earlier. You are welcome to buy this book. Depending on your tastes and requirements in novels, it just might work for you. If you are a long time reader like me, and have seen excellent plot lines come and go, it will probably end up rating so-so for you too.
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