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Posted March 27, 2011
I know somepeople have been complaining about the cliffhanger ending. Just so you know there is another Alana Wetherbee book. It is called Spooks and Magic by Jack Sorenson. I think it is the continuation of the first book. You can download it for free in your nook shop.
16 out of 21 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 19, 2011
I loved the characters! And how Alana didnt have any friends at the beginning made her seem normal. It is like Harry Potter but that is why I like reading it. I would definetly recommend this book to anyone who likes magic and love stories.
11 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 4, 2011
It felt really choppy and i tried to force myself to read all of it, but i couldn't. I guess it was ok.
5 out of 9 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 23, 2012
Im 9 and i luv it!! I love how it gets exciting!! After i read i started writing books!! On my latest book, travling around the U.S.A im only on page 57 and thats only the middle! (Im typing it online)
4 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 11, 2011
First, this is clearly a book for teens, not adults. It is not very well written, but has some good ideas. It is rushed with little chatacter and story development. Made for a reader with a short attention span. If more time had been spent on one of the three parts of this story, and had been fleshed out it may have been good. The writer has a long way to go, but has decent ideas, just needs more experiance and some writing classes.
4 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 6, 2010
BEST SELLING BOOK
Alana Weatherbee made the best sellers list twice pluse 25 most bought books at Smashwords .com Los Gatos...
5.0 out of 5 stars Great Read!, October 29, 2010
By ami reader (fl) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Alana Weatherbee (Book 1) (Kindle Edition)
This book was a very strong read! The editing was excellent and the story was so imaginative that I could see it side by side with J.K Rowling's series of Harry Potter. A page turner with real -fleshed out characters and very interesting tale. I love seeing the mind of a writer on the pages, especially when the mind is so imaginative and creative!
Recommended!
Ami Blackwelder
Author of The Hunted of 2060
4 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 25, 2011
I like it and I think the target audience will, too.
3 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 18, 2012
Amazing!BEST book ever!!!!!!!
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 7, 2012
Jack your a awesone writer. I love the character Alana Weatherbee. So aewsome I really enjoyed this book get it its so good
2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 10, 2011
When i first got this book, ii thought it was just a book trying to beat hp. But i got it anyway. It was weird because i didn't want to enjoy it but it was addicting. I did get pretty emotional at the end though because you really do feel like they were in real life.I mean i actually felt like it was me standing rigt next to them. It felt like they were actually in love. Not just those teenagers telling everyone that they were soulmtes kind of love. The literally to die for love. It was a very sad ending that i felt could have had more elaboration not just, "those were the last words he heard" THE END
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted September 6, 2011
I personally i liked tthe book and read the second one if this series but absolutely HATED the ending of the series
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 1, 2011
GOOOOODDD
2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted June 25, 2011
The story is great with a lot of potential. The characters need more time to develop they are too vague. A little more depth about each one would bring them to life a lot more. I think the author has wonderful writing potential, just a few tweaks here and there. Otherwise, I look forward to reading the next installment. To all the cooments that it's terrible, not so. It gets a bit diffucult to keep up from character swap to swap but readable and interesting. To the author: Keep up your hard work and efforts you only will get better the more you do.
2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 7, 2012
Y does everyone say it is a.poorly written book?It is not,it is really good and NOT choppy to me.I may only be on 5th grade but it is a great book for upper elementary and beyond.I do not suggest this book to little kids from 3 rd grade and under.Otherwise it is a wonderful book and you really should get it.It is and advanced to intermediate(whatever that means) reading level so if you are a good reader in 4th grade or up get thos book.I luv how in the beginning she gets picked.on by the school bullies because she is the new girl because that is what really happens in real life but mostly the rest of it is fiction.You will get hooked by the first few pages.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 28, 2012
The author has created an excellent story...but needs a strong editor, or at the very least, a beta reader who's a stickler for details. The grammatical errors distracted from the the tale, and structural progression was choppy. Still, the story is a good one. As I am not a writer, I admire those with a creative mind!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 21, 2012
This was the best book
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Posted April 15, 2012
It is okay so far. Sometimes I feel that I get kinda lost. It just keeps jumping around and it is really hard to keep up. You find that at one po int your all like " mhmm... ya okay... Alana just...mhmm..." and then the next point your like " wait.... what just happened? How did she get ... wait.. thier not even talking about Alana.... what?" You know what I mean? It's pretty good other wise. It is pretty funny. Well, I am not finished with the book yet, almost, but not yet so it might improve. It is really good other wise! Hope you read it! We all have our different opinoins! Bye!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 14, 2012
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 12, 2012
Okay, but way to choppy. Hard to folliw at times.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 10, 2012
I absolutly love everything else but the ending! The pots great and so is the character development through out the story. It was amazing for a free book. I definently suggest getting this book if you liked hp. Although, its kinda a copy but, but the author still made it work and different. Id give it 4/5 stars.
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Overview
Fifteen year old Alana Weatherbee leaves home for the first time to study at the School of Shines of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Finding herself the school outcast, she gains acceptance by becoming champion of the Labyrinth Games in spite of her teammates, the school bullies. Then Alana meets Logan, another outcast and, together, they fight to save their world from the evil Book of Spells.