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Posted March 28, 2013
11 pages, well written. Very interesting. I may be reading too much into it but i thought the ending was quite a twist.
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Posted November 22, 2013
Although I have always felt like you shouldn't complain about something you get for free, this felt like a "gottcha" kind of transaction. It was only a few pages long, badly written - unless it was written by a middle school student. Then perhaps you might say it was a B effort. Yes, I remember the news story it was based on, and can see how it might inspire a "back story" of how this incident might have uncovered a crime. But that would have required some research and laying out the details in a "procedural crime novel" that could have been interesting to read. But I digress, that has nothing to do with this weak effort that should not even be billed as a short story, much less a novel. Sorry, the writer needs a lot more practice and should keep his day job.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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