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Posted December 26, 2012
The story has potential, but it reads more like a preview of a longer, more substantial story; there really isn't enough to it to stand as a complete story in it's own right. I'm annoyed to have paid for it; it's like paying for a draft of chapter one when you were expecting to get a novel.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted May 9, 2012
Not worth a buck. Had this been book or even short story length it could have been good. The author has a decent grasp of exposition and descriptive narrative. The tech present in his world is intriguing as was the protagonists internal conflicts.
All that said this story reads like a single chapter ripped out of a larger work. If you read the description tou have read the story and most probably inferred a great deal more than is actually included in this short
Posted December 27, 2010
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