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Posted November 10, 2012
First let me say I have extreme respect for anyone who writes and finishes a book. I was hoping to enjoy this book. I love any with military characters - except this one . The dialogue was extemely unatural. Ive never heard men speak so much during their portion of the dialogue unless they're nervous and I don't think that was the case with every character. And when someone just left the military they would not share their entire history-ex. Rank, length of time in and espesially the fact they were special forces-with someone they met 1minute earlier, regardless of how hot they think that person is. There were other problrms with the writing, but this was the most bothersome to me. Never written a poor review before and its not meant to be hurtful. Just trying to give the author some insight that may be helpful in future writings. The story idea was great, just needed help with the way it was presented.
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Posted November 25, 2012
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