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Posted August 4, 2013
I have to agree with Sigh. It could have been more detailed, and you should've done something to like talk about their life in that two moon stretch. It would've made it alot more interesting.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted August 2, 2013
"Nooo!!" Howled Sunsetshimmer's son, Metalpaw. His sister Featherpaw was shocked and his other sister Silverpaw fainted. Bearclaw and Spiritheart were in grief, and Stormclaw bowed his head. Ivykit, Puddlekit, and Leafkit gasped. Pearlheart told Midnightpaw to get thistle for the shock. Tigerclaw and Honeypool brought moss soaked with cold water and squeezed the water onto Silverpaw's face to wake her up. After Sunsetshimmer's family each got a good dose of thistle, Pearlheart and Midnightpaw rubbed rosemary and watermint onto Sunsetshimmer's body. The elders carried her to the burial place. Sunsetshimmer's family covered her with soil and they grieved. Two moons later, the kits were ready to become apprentices!
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