Disappointed- Too many characters and open story lines
This book was all over the place! First of all, who approves the cover art for this series, and can anyone explain who the dark-haired, leather-wearing, tatooed woman is? I know, don't judge a book by the cover...
The general idea of this book is great- I'm intrigued by Dante, Heather, and Von, and greatly enjoyed the approximately 1/4 of the book in which we are "with" them. The book begins exactly where the last one left off. Heather and Dante come together again (even if a little awkwardly), and are constantly being pursued by the FBI, SB, Fallen, and anyone else the author could imagine throwing in. There was entirely TOO MUCH FBI/SB character development. I really don't care about Gillespie's drinking problem or that his wife left him. I actually couldn't keep track of all the agents and who they are and how they fit it, there were entirely too many of them, and they really don't add anything to the story or give us further insights about the "main" characters.
Ok, I get it- everyone's has their reasons for trying to kill or capture Dante, but it was almost as if the author was adding characters throughout the book out of nowhere just to add more to the list! If I were to guess, by the end of this book, I would say the author has given Dante and/or Heather approximately no less than 15 entities chasing after them. How does the author ever hope to resolve all the doors she's opened in this book alone? I understand that this is a series, but from my experience, shouldn't at least some things get resolved by the end of the book?
I feel like the author has spread herself too thin. She makes a big deal out of Heather researching and needing to know more about her mother's death at the beginning of the book, but that gets totally lost by the middle of the book. That part of the story line is either important, or it's not. The author also gives Heather these flashbacks of her mother's last minutes before her death, but we never learn what these are about or why she's having them. And now she's dragged Heather's sister Annie along for this ride, and truthfully, I can see why she's there, but her character has been left only partially developed.
Then there's all the intrigue among The Fallen. Until the end of the book, the sections where we read about their stories left me a little empty.
Plus, there's only so many times I can read the exact same flashbacks of Chloe from Dante. Let's move on here, shall we?
If you're expecting great character development between Dante and Heather, or even Von, Simone, or Silver, you will be as disappointed as I was. They all seem to have gotten lost among those pursuing Dante, and the personal dramas of all the FBI & SB characters introduced here. I'm sure I'll read the next in the series, but only to see if or how the author plans to resolve all the storylines she's introduced in this book! There really are much better books out there in this genre, I only hope the author's editor decides to actually read the next book before it's published....
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